The Mouse Chase

Here is a story that I had to do for school, I think was in 6th grade.
      The Mouse Chase
I woke up one morning seeing that I had a lot of mice all around me, all of them were chattering to each other. I could not understand them all, except two mice.
     "Where did you come from," said a gray mouse.
     "What is your name?" another mouse said.
I jumped up as fast as I could and started to run away from the mice, but I tripped and fell over a wrinkle from my bed, the farthest I got was to the end of my bed. When, I stopped my feet before I went off the bed, I hear my mom at the bottom steps telling me to get out of bed.
  Then I heard "Run! the giant might be coming up soon!" said a big fat mouse.
My mom still at the bottom of the steps saying "Get out of bed hun so we can go to the mall."
Before I knew it I was being trampled by the mice that were on my bed. One of the mice grabbed
me and took me through a small hole that went some were. I was so scared to see what was going on and what was about to happen, I closed my eyes.
 I know that I went through many spitter webs, bushed under things, and half trampled over by all the mice.
      When it was all over with a mouse ask me, "Are you okay?" ,With a nice mouse voice, I turned my head towards the mouse with my eyes closed, wondering why it was so dark.
     "I cannot see!" I said.
He grabbed my eyelids with his little palls real hard, pulling them up so that I can see.
"Hi, my mane is Peter, but you can call me Pete. Now you know my name, whats your's?" He ask me.
    "My...na...na...name is... Michelle," with a squeaky voice I said.
After we introduced ourselves, I looked all around seeing bugs, dust, and spiders everywhere. Then I felt a small pull on my pall, that Pete was holding, and hearing him say "Come with me. We are going to do some cool stuff right now!"
 We ran out of the place that we were in, through the grass, and up a pole that went to my slide. We stopped at the top of the slide.
     "This will be lots of fun! you can go first and I will follow you," Peter said to me. Well I really did not want to go down the slide at all, but he just had to pushed me down it. I rolled, smashed, bumped my head, and slid off the slide in the prickly grass were Peter could not see me any more.
I  looked up felling that I was being watch very closely, just only to find out that what was watching me so closely was a ferocious cat. The cat was drooling on me with hunger in his eyes. I started to run as fast as I could across the the yard away from the cat.
 I was wondering what else could go wrong, than seeing a shadow coming apond me fast, and felling a cold hard claws from a falcon rap around me. The falcon grabbed me and swooped me up into the air. The falcon held me so tightly in his claws, I could not breathe or move. I was wondering witch way I was going to die at that moment . Than suddenly I slammed into a tree branch, finding out the falcon had let me go.
  I was laying on a thin branch gasping for air when suddenly I felt big pulling on my small tail, from a gray squirrel.
    "You bad mice! You always wake me up when I am trying to sleep, now you will be really sorry that you got out of that birds claws," said the mad gray squirrel.
The gray squirrel picked me up and threw me at the house going through my bedroom window.
I landed on my bed and hearing my mom yelling and coming up the step. She stopped yelling at me when she open the door, and saw me as mouse.
Yelling again at the top of her lungs say, "Mouse, mouse.... must die!" I felt like I just died when she said those words.
My mom grabbed one of my boots that was by my bedroom door. I jumped off my bed looking some were safe to go in, but only to find out that I was trapped in a corner. My mom was coming on me fast! When I looked up seeing a big muddy boot coming down on me fast and hard. When suddenly I woke up from a bad dream, "I am person...not a mouse!" I said to my self. Than I looked at my feet, seeing my cat jumping on me. I was so happy to be me again! The End!

    Sorry for it being so long and some of my spelling. Is it good or bad??